Photo Prompt- © Dale Rogerson
They were stuck. In a swamp. And night was quickly approaching. Jack and Annie sat in their car, shocked that both tires had blown, sending them careening off off the road. Jack looked at his phone, but there was no service. Spotting a light in the distance and with nothing else to do, they stepped out. The water ice cold around their ankles, they suddenly heard bubbling, like boiling water. Annie, screamed. Her legs became entwined in hastily growing fiddleheads. Her screams pierced the air as she sank into the murky water. Jack pulled, but could not stop her from submerging. Then silence. Terrified, he ran for the house across the street. Frantically, he knocked. An elderly lady with an unusually long nose answered the door. A black cat circled under feet, smiling.
Here is my attempt at a bit horror. Not exactly gruesome, though hopefully scary enough. Happy Halloween!
This is a story in 100 words (oops, I many have gone a bit over this week) for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle-Wisoff-Fields based on the photo above. Click the blue frog to read more stories inspired by this photo!
Very Halloweeny. Can a cat smile? I know the Cheshire cat did but then he could smile without the cat, if you see what I mean. And echo in a swamp? Technical nit-pickiness aside, I liked it. Good build up of tension.
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Point well taken. Maybe her silence echoed instead? Thanks for your feedback!
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if a cat can be grumpy then it can also smile 😀
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And this lady’s cat definitely smiles when Jack comes to the door.
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Happy Halloween with the family.
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Happy Halloween to you, too! Will you dress up as a Tesla coil with crazy hair? 🙂
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No, but the crazy hair sounds fun.
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I would definitely put it in the scary category!
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This was one of those “I could see it all happening in my head. Now I how do I put it into 100 words!” stories. Glad you thought it was scary 🙂
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good one! 🙂
Jack’s name reminded me Rose, might just be even better 😀
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You’re going to have to refresh my memory about Rose. Glad you liked.
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from a ship that sunk more than 100 years ago
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Ahh that Rose. 🙂 hehe, this time it was “rose” who sunk. Excellent corrolation. I never would have thought of it.
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Halloween thrillies and chillies!
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Creepy scary…. 🙂
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Beautifully scary, just right for the time. And of course cats can smile, although not all may be able to grin.
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There’s only one cat I know of who can grin. And that grin can grin without the cat.
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That’s the one I mean. 🙂
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Nice creepout story. I expect to see it on film next year around Halloween>:)
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That would be fun! Glad you liked it.
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Nice tension in this tale.
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Thanks. All in the spirit of Halloween 🙂
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Then VERY well done.
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I can see the spin…Stuck somewhere…a smiling cat…woman with a long nose. Sounds like a party and the company could be fun!!
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HAHA Good one Ann! The company IS a bit mad and they like hats.
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It would be an awesome party! 😀
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